Bethany’s father becomes worried when he sees the injuries on Bethany’s face and asks why Larry did not stand by her. He then tells her that she should divorce Larry. Read More

 

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Bethany’s Pain

Bethany stood silently in her father’s office, the soft hum of the air conditioner filling the heavy space between them. The sunlight from the large glass window fell directly on her face—and that’s when her father saw it.

The bruises. The faint cuts. The swelling that makeup could no longer hide.

MR. NEWBURGER: "Bethany… What happened to your face?"

The Confrontation

Bethany lowered her eyes, her fingers tightening around the strap of her bag. "Dad… it’s nothing. I just—"

MR. NEWBURGER: "Nothing? Those are injuries. Someone hurt you."

Her father’s voice rose as he stepped closer, a mix of concern and anger building up.

Revelations

Bethany hesitated, then whispered, “He was there… but he didn’t stop it.”

MR. NEWBURGER: "He didn’t stop it?"

Bethany’s words hung in the air, and the silence between them became unbearable as her father’s expression darkened.

A Father’s Rage

Mr. Newburger turned away, running a hand through his hair as anger boiled beneath the surface.

MR. NEWBURGER: "I trusted him with you. I believed he would protect you—no matter what."

BETHANY: "I kept waiting for him to say something… to choose me." 💔

The Decision

There was a long pause. Then he spoke words Bethany never expected to hear.

MR. NEWBURGER: "Then you need to divorce him."

Bethany looked up in shock. “Dad—”

MR. NEWBURGER: "No. Listen to me." He gently held her face, careful not to touch the bruises. "A man who watches his wife get hurt and stays silent is not a husband. He’s a spectator."

Breaking the Silence

Just then, the office door opened and Greg stepped in, mid-conversation—until he saw Bethany’s face. 😳

GREG: "Whoa… Bethany, what happened?"

Bethany wiped her tears, trying to smile, but it faltered.

GREG: "Sir… who did this?"

MR. NEWBURGER: "Family drama that crossed a line."

END YOUR STORY WITH SUSPENSE HERE…

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