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Brooke vs. Bethany
INT. ATLANTA – BETHANY’S HOUSE – LATE AFTERNOON

Tension in the Living Room

Muted sunlight filters through the living room curtains. The house feels quiet, but tense — like something is about to crack. BROOKE (17) sits on the couch, phone in hand, smiling softly at a text message. Her body language is lighter than it’s been in days.

ISAIAH: “I’m outside. Be there in two minutes.”

Brooke exhales, excited. From the hallway, BETHANY (40s) watches her. Arms crossed. Jaw tight. A look of irritation flashes across her face.

BETHANY: (cold, controlled) “You’re smiling a lot these days.”

BROOKE: (not looking up) “I’m allowed to smile.”

Conflict Emerges

BETHANY: “Every time you smile like that, it’s because of him, right?”

BROOKE: (smile fading) “Isaiah’s my boyfriend. What’s your point?”

BETHANY: “My point is… you’ve been avoiding me. You don’t sit with me. You don’t talk to me. You barely stay in this house anymore.”

BROOKE: (flat) “Because I don’t want to.”

A sharp silence lands between them.

BETHANY: “Lower your voice.”

BROOKE: “Why? So I don’t hurt your feelings?”

Boundaries and Power

BETHANY: “You think spending all your time with Isaiah makes you grown?”

BROOKE: “No. It just makes me happy.”

BETHANY: “You’re getting too comfortable. And comfort makes kids disrespectful.”

BROOKE: “I’m not a kid. And you’re not my mother.”

Bethany freezes — then slowly turns toward the front door as she hears a car door shut outside. Her eyes flick back to Brooke.

BETHANY: (low, firm) “He’s not coming in today.”

BROOKE: (confused) “What?”

BETHANY: “I said Isaiah is not coming in this house.”

Confrontation at the Door

BROOKE: “You don’t get to decide that.”

BETHANY: “I do when your father isn’t here.”

Brooke’s face drains of color — not fear, but anger mixed with panic. Brooke’s phone buzzes again. ISAIAH: “I’m at the door.” She rushes toward the entryway. Bethany steps in front of her.

BROOKE: “Move.”

BETHANY: “No.”

BROOKE: “You can’t control who I see.”

BETHANY: “I can control who walks into my house.”

Their faces are inches apart now.

BROOKE: (voice shaking, furious) “You’re doing this on purpose.”

BETHANY: “Maybe. Or maybe I’m protecting this family.”

The Door Closes

A knock at the door. Both women freeze. Another knock — louder. ISAIAH (O.S.): “Brooke?” Brooke looks past Bethany toward the door, desperate.

BROOKE: “Please don’t do this.”

Bethany’s eyes flicker — guilt, jealousy, fear — all tangled together. She opens the door just enough to step outside, blocking the view.

ISAIAH: “Hey… is Brooke—”

BETHANY: “She’s busy.”

ISAIAH: “She texted me—”

BETHANY: “You should go.”

ISAIAH: “Did I do something wrong?”

BETHANY: “This isn’t about you. It’s about boundaries.”

Aftermath

From inside, Brooke watches — heart racing. Brooke shouts toward Isaiah. Bethany closes the door before he can respond. The lock clicks. Silence.

BROOKE: “You just crossed a line.”

BETHANY: “So did you… a long time ago.”

Brooke’s eyes fill — not with tears, but with resolve.

BROOKE: “When my dad finds out—(and he will) this house is going to explode.”

BETHANY: (swallowing hard, unsure) “Then I guess… we’ll see who he believes.”

BROOKE: (quiet, dangerous) “This isn’t over.”

Bethany remains standing alone in the living room — the weight of her decision pressing down on her. Outside, Isaiah’s car starts… then slowly pulls away. Bethany closes her eyes. She knows what she’s done. But it may already be too late.

FADE OUT. TO BE CONTINUED…

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